Spleen - After Hours

Electribe · Post by **Electribe** » Fri Apr 06, 2007 5:16 pm

Hi,

I´ve finished a new track, perhaps something for the morning after.
I would appreciate your comments!

http://www.myspace.com/minimalspleen

Rochey · Post by **Rochey** » Fri Apr 06, 2007 5:55 pm

I enjoyed this, it has quite a "Summery" feel to it, you use good sounds,

Biggs · Post by **Biggs** » Mon Apr 09, 2007 8:35 am

hey dude, it's quite nice. i think it needs something more though. the bass drum needs an extra kick maybe or an extra hihat, something to grab the attention more. would have to eq that a fair amount to get anything from it really. i can't really loose myself in the electronic loop either, needs to be more drawn out in parts or more wonky?

still a pretty nice track, if not a little boring, but i like it in general...

(i don't usually like to comment on peoples projects, as i dont mean to offend, sorry if this came over that way)

Footloose · Post by **Footloose** » Fri Apr 13, 2007 10:31 am

hmm this tutuutututu sound is annoying my ass of maybe you should use some kind of lfo, which makes the sound different for like the whole time, so that your track will be less annoying and boring

Electribe · Post by **Electribe** » Sat Apr 14, 2007 10:49 pm

Footloose wrote:hmm this tutuutututu sound is annoying my ass of maybe you should use some kind of lfo, which makes the sound different for like the whole time, so that your track will be less annoying and boring

Hehe, thanks for your comments! I am reworking it.