Nicolas Ovalle - fizuren zarpen (minimal techno)

murcielago · Post by **murcielago** » Fri Feb 09, 2007 10:51 pm

this is my new track.
hope you like it.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/oxqene

fl0w · Post by **fl0w** » Sat Feb 10, 2007 2:52 am

2:30 am, i'm tired and i can't listen to your track very loud but i'll try to do some comments on the fly before going to bed.

Ah, over 11 minutes long, we'll see if you can keep our attention

The intro is sounding nice.
The kick is too "high" for my taste but maybe it fits better later.
Already 4' and not a lot of things have happened yet :-/
The bouncing sound is the background is interesting, it could bounce more and less regularly.
Ah, here comes a new synth. Hmm, nothing special.
A mini break and another synth. This one's better, it should come far sooner and not at 8'.
The bouncing sound is back. Really cool. Richie could do a track with that sound only

Hmm new things happen 1 minute before the end, why so late?

OK, overall the structure is too random, i don't feel the global progression. Individually, each part is also too static. Try to do smoother transitions, and to introduce subtle variations. Soften the kick that has too much presence. Plan the construction of the track.

Maybe i should listen to your track louder, this could bring out some interesting things. Also don't forget my greatest wish right now is to go to bed

at least i'm not drunk

murcielago · Post by **murcielago** » Sat Feb 10, 2007 4:50 am

Well, really thanks by the comment and the, minute 2 minute feedback, all comments are good, and i like this comment.

I want a really slow progression, i planed this for this track, but, after reading your comment im ok with you, that individually, each part is also too static.
My wish was to create an hypnotic progression...

So, again, thanks for the time.