edium wrote:thanks for the feed back - i like techno/house as well i try to produce some of that
Raddler: could you be more specific? is it my percussion that needs to be punchier? and there isn't enough low end - like the bass line right? also does the mix sound muddy to you at all? it doesnt sound very crisp to me.
edit: oh also on the note of the mix being punchier I read a thread on different forum that said streaming music on soundcloud compresses the track and kills all the transients that might be the problem to the punchiness.. I made it downloadable which solves that problem. But I do agree I listened to some other professional tracks and they do have a certain punch I lack
Like I said, for a first song it isn't bad, i like the melody actually, kinda catchy...but yeah, it definetly needs more emphasis on subbass/bass/mids. I take back what i said about the punchiness, i had a listen on my speakers, and it does have more punch than i thought.....Muddy? not terribly, but i think you could improve on it a bit.I do however find the mix sounds a bit harsh, try and smooth it out a bit, round out you're percs and synths....it might be just perseved that way however because there's a lack of bass so all the highs are emphasized...Also, i'd add some pads to it in the breakdown, keep it flowing a little more. A better kick drum is needed as well....Good luck