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some feedback would be appreciated

Post by BrokenBo » Fri Jun 03, 2016 1:35 pm

so i recently started producing some music...there is still a long way to go i guess.

since i do not have many good producers as friends i will try to get some feedback here on the forum:

https://soundcloud.com/bo-deep/untitled2/s-fs0Sd

thank you guys!

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Re: some feedback would be appreciated

Post by AK » Sat Jun 04, 2016 10:37 pm

I think you're in the wrong place to seek feedback but I'll chip in. The track you posted sounds great, it sounds lovely on my system, but it nothing happens in the music. The whole track is the same as it starts. It sounds really good but you never go anywhere with it, it just repeats. Potential unexplored, :)

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Re: some feedback would be appreciated

Post by hydrogen » Sat Jun 18, 2016 3:39 pm

i would play. i really like all the cool effects you have going on for a nice spacious mixture. i like the depth.

As AK mentioned... The track doesn't progress.. maybe even losing or transforming the background loop into something different towards the end, the middle dropping or dipping the volume on some channels.

(Also the mods should move this to the members tracks section)
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