Hi,
Could really use some feedback on our new track;
https://soundcloud.com/conjoined/sfth
Its more of a deep/ jazz-ier house track.
Thanks in advance!
Conjoined - SFTH
Re: Conjoined - SFTH
hey, sounds good ... will play it next time ... thx for download ; )
-everything you think, do and say
is in the pill you took today-
:zager and evans:
-life is of the nature of water:
it always seeks the deepest place,
which is always below in the darkness
and heaviness of the earth.-
:c.g. jung:
is in the pill you took today-
:zager and evans:
-life is of the nature of water:
it always seeks the deepest place,
which is always below in the darkness
and heaviness of the earth.-
:c.g. jung:
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Re: Conjoined - SFTH
Hi,
First thing I noticed is the kick is a little wooly. There is a freq around 160Hz that could do with being cut. Also could really do with some sub in there. You can use a sine wave tuned or use something like VOG to get the beef it needs. Also the bass is a little lack luster and has no punch or power.
The keys are nice but could do with a progression to increase the tension. Cool clap to. I would work on the arrangement it just seems like a 4 bar loop plays through out and its easy to loose interested.
Keep up the good work
First thing I noticed is the kick is a little wooly. There is a freq around 160Hz that could do with being cut. Also could really do with some sub in there. You can use a sine wave tuned or use something like VOG to get the beef it needs. Also the bass is a little lack luster and has no punch or power.
The keys are nice but could do with a progression to increase the tension. Cool clap to. I would work on the arrangement it just seems like a 4 bar loop plays through out and its easy to loose interested.
Keep up the good work
Re: Conjoined - SFTH
Thanks wearemindflux for the feedback, really appreciate that!