New track, all feedback greatly appreciated!

[Mael]

Hey,

If you like some dark, dubby techno, please check out some of my work

http://soundcloud.com/maelmusik/mael-9

Cheers

[shellbound]

pretty cool track. deep and hypnotic. i like the dark atmosphere and a kind of industrial feel it has a lot. the only thing, though, is the bass has a lot of muddiness that you have to sort out. i listened to the track with a sub and there's a lot of rumbling that just wastes a lot of energy. i can't tell exactly in the spectrum it's coming from, as it feels like it could be both the sub-base range and also possibly something around 200-300Hz.

but other than that, i enjoyed this one.