New track idea. Would love some feedback

[Harry]

Not too sure where to go from here.

Would love to get it finished and take it to an engineer for some mastering.

Feedback is very welcome.

[Themis]

love the concept,
volume is way to low, i have to turn my speakers to full volume to even hear the sub baseline.
this could be a really great track, i hope you make it longer than the 4 minutes you showed here.
love the synth.

i my opinion the sub baseline which comes in every 16 steps, could be more highlighted

[Harry]

Thanks man. I know i'm having some volume issues, still relatively new to logic so a lot my productions are really quiet. Any tips on how to get them sounding louder would be good?

The sub bass sounds a lot better when i play it through Logic, but when i bounce it it seems to loose a lot of the punch, again i think these could be solved if i new how to master my own tracks a bit better.

Cheers for the feedback, i'll post up any changes i get done

[Themis]

if you have questions about producing use the producing sub forum, sadly i have no clue about those things :/