Made a new track. It's a bit slower and more groove oriented then my other stuff, hope you like it! Would love some feedback on it and will return the favour if i can!
http://soundcloud.com/jonas-edenbrandt/ ... eel-good-1
Thx
Jonas
Jonas Edenbrandt - Make You Feel Good
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Pleasant relaxing listen here with nice use of space and sound. I like what you did with the hihats.
The track is missing some changes, as it has a poppy vibe that could benefit from a verse/chorus type approach in my opinion.
The track is missing some changes, as it has a poppy vibe that could benefit from a verse/chorus type approach in my opinion.
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Re: Jonas Edenbrandt - Make You Feel Good
Thx for the comment. Gonna look into changing it up a little after finishing a few other things i have going.
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I like the track. The mood is great and I love the kick, its very earthy and reminds me of Theo Parrish.
I think the bassline is too silent and muddy perhaps? Try maybe bringin up the volume of the bass.
I also thought that maybe you could can the hihats and percussion to the sides a little bit? And you can maybe automate the panning on some percussion to move from left to right to create a kind of a hypnotic trippy feel? Because the track is intself very trippy and spacey so maybe that would add more to it.
This is great track I think, with a little polishing this will be fantastic!
I think the bassline is too silent and muddy perhaps? Try maybe bringin up the volume of the bass.
I also thought that maybe you could can the hihats and percussion to the sides a little bit? And you can maybe automate the panning on some percussion to move from left to right to create a kind of a hypnotic trippy feel? Because the track is intself very trippy and spacey so maybe that would add more to it.
This is great track I think, with a little polishing this will be fantastic!
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Thanks alot for the nice comments on both this track and my track Back Home. I've been working some on this track and tried a few things that you sugested and must say that I'm liking the results. I will post the new version of it as soon as I'm happy with the result, and hopefully get some new feedback on it.
The comment about reminding of Theo is a great compliment in my ears, one of the best!
The comment about reminding of Theo is a great compliment in my ears, one of the best!