Camel - Anatomie

Camel · Post by **Camel** » Fri Sep 10, 2010 1:41 pm

So, I got a new track ready, for which I would love your feedback.

http://soundcloud.com/camel/anatomie

Let me know what you think of the style, the composition, the mix, arrangement, feel free to criticize everything!

Thanks for taking the time to listen.

Camel · Post by **Camel** » Wed Sep 15, 2010 10:49 am

no one?

Christ Lewis · Post by **Christ Lewis** » Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:16 pm

Deep 'n dark. Sounds good.

Not entirely convinced by the clap and the white noise. I appreciate you're trying to do your part in the battle against unoriginal use of claps and white noise,

but I'm not sure whether they convey as much power as they should. They're not blatantly worthless either, I'm just.. not immediately convinced.

I wasn't convinced by the melody either, at the start, but you won me over over the course of the track.

Very nice twist at about 3:35. I wonder whether you could have played that out some more.

Camel · Post by **Camel** » Sat Sep 18, 2010 11:05 pm

Thanks for listening. Your comments are very helpfull, thank you!

Esemdi · Post by **Esemdi** » Sun Sep 19, 2010 8:58 pm

I agree, the clap should have been "more organic" so to speak. It should fit the rest of the track.