LetsGoOutside - can't see past you / eat my face

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LetsGoOutside - can't see past you / eat my face

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hmm both sound very nice to me ;) keep finishing ;)
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thanks. both need some mastering and balance work. they're only supposed to be three minutes, though, as they are a couple of my practice pieces for the laptop battle finals.

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I can't see past you -

Snare has too much stereo, it needs to be more mono. the ambience is nice, as are the pads, but the seem s bit thin to me, try adding some low end boost to them, they sound much warmer when they're deep.

I don't know about the hoover/stab it sounds unnesessirily harsh to me.

eat my face -

wow, thats a deep kick - is it just me or is the snare panned left? nice melody with the 808 congas. I think this track is better than the other, nice staccato effect, is that tight compression?

Im not feeling the harsh acid line in here though, but i see that as being a constant theme in these tracks, and thats cool.

i hope this has been of some help...
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thanks. yeah, a lot of "eat my face" ended up on the left, and i've found that it's a bug in the realtime d2d plug-in i was using.


and yes... tons of compression on the latter piece.
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hmm i watched the videos that were available form laptopbattles yesterday ;)
wish u all the best for this.. tell us if you've won or something ;)
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