Hello...
A little bit of disco music for You! Every feedback is welcome.
Greets!
michalwolski
http://soundcloud.com/michalwolski/balaphodisco
Michal Wolski - Balaphodisco
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So it's a good idea, and I like the sounds you use.
I'm not the most knowledgeable person on this forum regarding mixing/composition but I do have a couple thoughts/suggestions:
1) the hi-hat panned to the right could be a bit louder.
2)the song lacks drive, although this could just be me and the personal styles I usually listen to.
3) I think if you placed a pad somewhere like at the start of the breakdown (around 3:20), and put a chorus on it maybe with a little bit of a hi-pass filter on it, it could really build things up and get the vibes flowing.
Again though, don't take my opinion as the divine word or anything, because I'm still relatively new at producing myself!
I'm not the most knowledgeable person on this forum regarding mixing/composition but I do have a couple thoughts/suggestions:
1) the hi-hat panned to the right could be a bit louder.
2)the song lacks drive, although this could just be me and the personal styles I usually listen to.
3) I think if you placed a pad somewhere like at the start of the breakdown (around 3:20), and put a chorus on it maybe with a little bit of a hi-pass filter on it, it could really build things up and get the vibes flowing.
Again though, don't take my opinion as the divine word or anything, because I'm still relatively new at producing myself!
-kick is warm and round
-intro is a little cheap
-bass line is great
-hats come in just right
-gets a little boring when the clap comes in
im bored now
-the shaking synth is ok, pickingup a notch
-feel like the tom riff is a bit muddy
-seem like the breaks you put in aren't long enough or last an odd number of barrs
feel like the track would benefit from being slower OR tighter
-intro is a little cheap
-bass line is great
-hats come in just right
-gets a little boring when the clap comes in
im bored now
-the shaking synth is ok, pickingup a notch
-feel like the tom riff is a bit muddy
-seem like the breaks you put in aren't long enough or last an odd number of barrs
feel like the track would benefit from being slower OR tighter