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Combe - Until It Happen

Post by Combe » Thu Jan 03, 2008 1:12 am

Hello everyone, i'm new here ! I'm from France and I would like you to listen my music ! :wink: I make music for 6 months about.

Until It Happen have been made with Ableton Live + VST
time : 08'23
bpm : 126

link : HERE (1st song Of the player)

Give your feedbacks, I want to progress ! Thanks !

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Post by Alex Biron » Thu Jan 03, 2008 9:05 am

I don't like the kick. It might just be the player though. I think the hi hat needs some work too. Nice little melody, good work on that!

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Post by theory » Thu Jan 03, 2008 9:14 am

yea, the kick is a bit to deep and to omphy, try to give some punch to it, boost the hihat, the mix is a bit muddy to me, like the music is in the other room ,only the melodies r clear...

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Post by Combe » Thu Jan 03, 2008 11:09 am

OK, I will try to work on that ! Thanks for your coments ! :)

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Post by Alex Biron » Thu Jan 03, 2008 11:36 am

anytime.

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Post by spur » Fri Jan 04, 2008 6:46 pm

everyone already commented on the bass drum, so I'm not gonna do that..

very good atmosphere! nice distant samples :)

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Post by Combe » Fri Jan 04, 2008 6:52 pm

Thank you !! :)

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