rivendel - formule / white grass / metamorphic virus

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rivendel - formule / white grass / metamorphic virus

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Something from my production here:


Formule - minimal track (only demo)

http://rivendel.technopunk.net/formule.mp3
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White Grass - minimal atmospheric techno (only demo)

http://rivendel.d2.cz/whitegrass.mp3
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Metamorphic Virus - minimal atmospheric house&techhhouse (complete track)

http://rivendel.d2.cz/viruson.mp3

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all in 128 kbps
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Post by plaster »

last trak is pretty good...one thing though, please try to bring out the kick and the snare.
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Post by qubism »

we get just a little replys only here eh ...
its not so easy giving comments on them

well i liked them still they were a bit unspectacular...
u seem to allways have something atmospheric
sometimes a lil too much weight on that for my taste i must say.
also i think at some point u could give the sound a lil more schnigglediggle diggle if u know what i mean.those simple structured beats dont satisfy me to much. detail is allways good :P.

well its really what your taste is like maybe.
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Post by adam »

I'm a biased sucker, and I'm more into darker stuff when it comes to minimal unless it's ambient stuff totally devoid of beats USUALLY.

However, the last track has very nice movements with the drums. I think that's your strength there. I couldn't access the first track and I have no comments for the other one.
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Post by Militikie »

I also liked your rythems in the last one. think you should hold back the atmosfere, too much long pads. put some of the drums more in the front, makes it more fresh.
but hey, it`s your song :wink:
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