thanks a lot guys!

anyone?

hey guys. thought I'd see if anyone has any good ideas for this song I've been working on. Gonna try and get it released but I'm maybe still not quite happy about the mix. Anything pops out or stands out to be fixed?




bubbles 32-320 kbps vbr mp3

http://soundcloud.com/sublimator/runaway-marble


I like the subby bass and the bit non conventional sounding hihats. Not much going on. I tend to like songs with a bit more of a hook to them than just a perc going takata takata takata. Bland and a bit boring.

First of all think about the balance/mixing of the percs. Some eq or just simply lowering volume on some of the clicks might be good. And/Or put all the rhythm sh!t thru a group compressor to glue em a bit more together.

I like the bass hook.

I agree with tone-def on the bass/kick thing, usually its nicer to have the kick louder than the bass. Nice pretty stabbystabs. Feels a bit empty on the arrange side of things. Give more stuff or make it shorter. Higs and lows. There's no drama or tension, just this mellow loop which i don't think i...

Really don't like the straigth bassline, the sound or the line. sounds cheap. I like the vocals though, and the clicks and little sounds. Maybe cut down on the reverb, like said before, or cut some lows and mids from the reverb channel to make it brighter and thinner. The "biuuuuu" sound d...

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