...has come on really well mate from the last time I heard it. Pretty much as has been commented already, I think the patterns need a bit of movement. Even just the kick would make it a little bit more organic (trendy word eh?). What about some deep bass like stabs? Really like it anyway - it's wack...

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Hi mate, can you not run the bassline through something to dirty it up a little bit or even just to bring up front as a transition from how it starts? It sits quite far back and does get a little bit wearing without any dynamic movement. the glitchy sounds that come in after a minute or two need to ...

nice ideas. I personally think the arrangement could be simplified a little bit - I can see what you are doing but overall I think it would help to let it flow a little bit. The mix needs a bit of work as it doesn't sit well on my monitors. Definitely some great sounds / ideas. Only my opinion, Post...

...cool, useful feedback guys. Thanks a lot.

thanks for the feedback ML.

...good stuff man. Really like it. Good space in the track (if you know what I mean). Personally I think the snare is a little too loud but I'm listening on headphones so might not really be an issue. Good movement overall - like the arrangement a lot. Sounds and fx are great too. maybe a cl hat cou...

New one I've been working on. Still to be finalised and mixed etc. Your expert critique is required!!! Any comments really useful... Cheers, :wink: dl: http://213.129.73.14/members/my_tracks/audio/DT_ACF24993248650.mp3 stream: http://www.7161.com/streamer.cfm?filename_audio=DT_ACF24993248650.mp3&...