the break is too long in time
the tension is good and will work on the dancefloor
when the drop is better
the drop is now a little bit weak

i checked your myspace
really nice tunes with the sound of today
lots of tribal influences

yeah really nice like the snare / drums part at the end of the bar
percussion and the end is also really nice

im really not a expert with eqing and mastering but it sounds really good to me.
only at the 3 min mark the sound get alot harder
and i agree with the higher synth could be better eq-ed

to be honest not really my cup of tea
but i think you did a great job
the atmosphere is really great
just an idea mayb you could add a part with some offbeat kicks in it

dont know the features of reason but i think every daw got a wav import
so bouncing down to audio is also an option

you can also post this in the dj / liveset section cause its a liveset
i think you get more feedback in that section

nice atmosphere
mayb you could work on the drums
mayb sometimes a bigger snare