new track of mine, inspired by Nathan Fake - the sky was pink..... i used the same bassline... tell me what ya think about it

http://www.djsleebos.nl/Jap_a_Tap_-_Lucy.mp3

Im new here... im producing for one year now and here is a snippet of my last track.... advice and other critics are always welcome...

http://www.djsleebos.nl/Jap_a_Tap_-_Oh_no.mp3