ok, i'll take a look thanks!

Thanks for the feedback, i really need to think more about flow and rythym/swing rather than just bashing out stuff (and not master it so heavily)

I'm uploading something better, a totally different track altogether!

5) the sound quality is lacking I'm just wondering what you mean here, is there not enough highs? i did roll them off a bit lower. it is an mp3, the wav sounds a lot better 1) its too rigid, there is no flow. Can you expand on this? Not sure what you mean.. 3) the reverse thing is off time Does any...

thanks for everyones comments

I'm new here

Working on this track, its a bit different, do you reckon its any good?

http://soundcloud.com/daveashe/xml-sucks-seq22-320

Need a second opinon guys, thanks!