my newest track, Parasitic Organism, dark percussive techno hefty style

some feedback would be great, thanks in advance

http://soundcloud.com/hefty/parasitic-organism

bender wrote:this is a dark beast!
it evolves nicely troughout the tune, nothing much to complain about

wow nice one thanks, dark beast sounds good to me!! many thanks for checking it out!!

anyone else had a listen?

my latest track, im pretty happy with it but as always im definately open to suggestions/criticism, it makes my tracks better so id appreciate some feedback. cheers dark spooky atmospheric techno business, with hypnotic perc, trippy fx and some floaty strings "Dont try to escape, dont cry for h...

MarkA wrote:cool tune, not overly keen on the vocal sample, but great groove to it, and the atmosphere's are great

cheers fella, thanks for taking a listen, i had success with the label, its gonna b released on Taktgeber Muzik !!

wicked

cool ive made some changes so if any1 could give it another listen id appreciate it, cheers

i may have a label interested so id appreciate some more feedback/suggestions that i can make before sending it, many thanks

www.soundcloud.com/hefty/in-cold-blood

so ive completely reworked the track including all the suggestions made by you guys, ive had it kick in harder at the relevant points, added a longer breakdown, re arranged sh!t, added swing/groove, made the bass arp thing bassier and prob some other sh!t too, so id really appreciate some more feedb...

heya hefty how are you? Good work, nice atmosphere in the track. The kick might be a bit too low in the mix, but maybe thats the speakers im checking at atm, anyway keep up the good work hey mate great to hear from you, im doing really well thanks, making tunes as always! thats great u like the tra...