Hello,

I think your track has a good idea - I like the chords, but I think there are several improvemets. You could change or imrpove the bassline, and also the rhythm variation, but this is only my opinion

Hi there,

nice track, I like the bassline melody and also the square arp sequence
Looking forward for your next track

Hi there,

I think you could do several improvements on your track - there is only click drum during full length track, maybe you could improve the bassline, but this is only my opinion

Hi there,
promising track - it could be interesting, you could add some rhythm variation (maybe acoustic percussions, but I can imagine also stricly electronic "blip, crack, plonk" drums but its up to you!

I can also imagine bassline at lower level.

Hi guys, nice to see you there

Oma is very good track, with emotions I like it

Nice, happy tune, good for the dancefloor
I also like acoustic piano in breakdown.

Nice and fine track, did you use drum samples or hardware drum machine?
Thanks for info

Pumping tune,
I especially like the part after breakdown