Bazz Barr - Untitled03

[bazz001]

I'm looking for some feedback / criticisms for this track, I think it needs a really good mastering job to bring it together and maybe some background fx or something
I have only been listening to it on my monitors so not sure how it sounds on other set ups yet, would appreciate any comments anyways.

heres the link -
http://www.electrotoxic.com/bazzbarr/ba ... tled03.mp3




cheers

[bazz001]

just noticed there is a jump at the start, dunno why it's there. Must not have exported properly.

[elactromat]

I like it man. The windy progression on the snare is pretty cool as well and I really like the bleeps around 4.00 are nice.

I think that sometimes it is a problem when listening to a track in isolation, I mean you forget that in the end it will sit within a mix of other tracks.

I like things to be very minimal.

I would keep it just as it is arrangement wise perhaps to add a little space to try panning some of the outer effects to the side and leaving the bass, kicks and other key part sitting in the middle it a little more traditional way of mixing but it might be worth a try.

Hope this is of help.

[bazz001]

Thanks for the feedback, glad you like it

I know what your saying about the lack of space in parts, gonna pan it out before I start mastering.

cheers

[Semirk]

Really nice intro, the stuff going on in the back is great. The bleeps at the beginning are bit too close for my liking, no idea why. But then they get more evnly spaced and thats more to my taste.

It builds very nicely too, percussion is good also. Some really sweet glitches after 2:30 too, really liking those. The little melody is cool as well.

Really like this one, would maybe prefer the little melody a bit higher in volume though thats personal taste really.

Great work

[bazz001]

cheers for checking it out for me, I appreciate the comments.