This is the first tune i've made that is based all on one idea and actually goes through the motions like a real track.
Any feedback would be great!
My first proper finished track
Re: My first proper finished track
Sounds good to me, especially for a first track. I wish my 1st track had sounded this good, judging from a quick headphone listen, there's nothing wrong with the mix, things sound very balanced.
Musically, you might want to introduce a new element halfway through to keep things a bit more interesting. A little melody, a pad sound, some extreme delays, something.
Musically, you might want to introduce a new element halfway through to keep things a bit more interesting. A little melody, a pad sound, some extreme delays, something.
Re: My first proper finished track
Cheers man! Thanks for the feedback. I've been making bits on logic for a while, but this is the first one that i've managed to properly finish and may be able to play out.
I was thinking of adding in something new, but i couldn't something to fit well enough, might go back to it in a week or so a have another go
I was thinking of adding in something new, but i couldn't something to fit well enough, might go back to it in a week or so a have another go
Re: My first proper finished track
really nice track, the kick and bass sounds solid (although what's with the panned bass?) but the metallic hihat is a bit too harsh on the listener (imagine listening on headphones, you can't crank the volume up because it would be too piercing, it's keeping the track back). Otherwise I think you could beef up the main dub synth a bit with some tube distortion, more high freqs and more bass, plus a stereo effect like chorus. Seeing as it's so lonely it's nice to make it big.
great first track mate
great first track mate
Re: My first proper finished track
I really like how this track holds back! I agree with the comment about the hat. Nice one!
Re: My first proper finished track
Yo, cheers for the feedback. Not sure how the bass ended up panning, i think it's due it being in unison on ES2, I don't mind it though 
. A couple of people have said about the hat as well, going to change that soon. I agree about the synth too, it sounded beefier playing the track in logic, going to change that when I go back to do the hat. I'll let you know when it's updated. Glad you're liking it!
. A couple of people have said about the hat as well, going to change that soon. I agree about the synth too, it sounded beefier playing the track in logic, going to change that when I go back to do the hat. I'll let you know when it's updated. Glad you're liking it!Re: My first proper finished track
Very good man. I like the vibe of the track, very reserved and chill.
I think however, that you could your hihats a bit, they are too sharp and piercing.
Now this is an idea i'm suggesting but I thought it would have been cool to hear some vocal snippet here and there. Would have fitted the mood of the track.
Again, nice job! Keep it up!
I think however, that you could your hihats a bit, they are too sharp and piercing.
Now this is an idea i'm suggesting but I thought it would have been cool to hear some vocal snippet here and there. Would have fitted the mood of the track.
Again, nice job! Keep it up!
Re: My first proper finished track
No vocal snippets please! They are one of the most annoying things in modern techno.