mathias lexicon - feels right
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sounds nice, snare roll at 1 min sounds touch out of time, maybe it drops a bit late...
maybe if you were to introduce a new sound to start the breakdown, break it down to that new sound, then drop the beat back in. it seems to fade, and start up again on the same sound set.
i l ike the arp coming in at 3:20, but it sounds a touch flat, maybe try to eq or filter it to brighten the sound.
the build/drop at 4:05 was a good idea, but you didn't quite nail it. maybe fade it off more, run a high pass over it?
i like the vocals a lot. and the bass is tres clean too.
maybe if you were to introduce a new sound to start the breakdown, break it down to that new sound, then drop the beat back in. it seems to fade, and start up again on the same sound set.
i l ike the arp coming in at 3:20, but it sounds a touch flat, maybe try to eq or filter it to brighten the sound.
the build/drop at 4:05 was a good idea, but you didn't quite nail it. maybe fade it off more, run a high pass over it?
i like the vocals a lot. and the bass is tres clean too.