pheek wrote:I'm not the truth but if you ask me for feedback, you don't need to come on the forum to make sure I was right or wrong. When someone gives you feedback you can either work on it or ignore it. As for you hook, I believe you can play the subtle card of minimal percussion which can always work the way through. But if you a strong hook, it might make a track that will be ageless.
Why not just f*ck around with your hook to make it evolve a bit? You can also play with dynamics (pan, velocity, envelope, ofset, etc). That could be a nice add.
Your track is not weak or bad as I told you, it just could be "more."
i know what ur saying, thats why i'm working on it from that day i sent it to ya. it's kind of getting on my tits because i'm constantly changinng the arrangement, but keeping it subtle at some point. um,i think u'll like this version better since it has a transpozed bassline and a few extra sounds. um, i thought not to make the trak evolving, but plain minimal as the flow goes. just exporing how further can the arrangement go with a few sounds untill it doesn't break into something boring. i'm taking all of the comments in the biggest possible use... we'll see what comes out.
thnx dood!