Spid - Compute1

Spid · Post by **Spid** » Sat Jan 14, 2006 9:54 pm

Hi guys,

here's my last track,just finished it...
I'm not really satisfied,maybe it's too minimal

...and i'm not sure of the two bass idea...maybe you can help me

Download Here

See ya!

kenada · Post by **kenada** » Sat Jan 14, 2006 10:12 pm

the little synth flourishes you use in the intro are far too dry, they'd sound great with some reverb on them i think.

the two bass idea is fine, but the acid stab bass has too much stab for my taste, maybe put a bigger attack on the amp env.

the new lead after 3 mins sounds like a dj mixing in a new track, it doesn't seem to gel or transition well.everything comes together better after 4:20 though. so working on a new way to introduce the new synths/section is a must.

i like what you did with the rim shot early on, that was nice

Spid · Post by **Spid** » Sat Jan 14, 2006 10:20 pm

thx kenada,that what i was expecting...i wasn't sure about the structure of this track

I take care of your advices...and wait for others feedbacks...maybe a mnml.nl edit soon

thx again

plaster · Post by **plaster** » Sun Jan 15, 2006 12:42 am

sounds okay... the chord works really well, i like it! um, apart from that, drums kind of suck, maybe cos i got used to hear the same set in every track. bass works really well... i dunno, nice piece, you could work on some textures and complex programming a bit.

mlexicon · Post by **mlexicon** » Sun Jan 15, 2006 2:04 am

i like the beginning

i dig the bass

weird keys...i think they could have been more reverbish for this..

i would have loved a snare kit after that first pause....

i dunno bout that spooky synth..

the happy keys and that dark one dont match the greatest

good lil song

could be better without too much trouble

Spid · Post by **Spid** » Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:58 am

Thx mlexicon and plaster

Ok so i'll work a little on it

Spid · Post by **Spid** » Sun Jan 15, 2006 3:30 pm

Little update,same link...

Waiting for feedbacks

thx in advance!