Semirk - Closer Cinema

Semirk · Post by **Semirk** » Sun Jan 01, 2006 3:56 pm

Hey again,

Back with another here, this time I was aiming for a deliberately weird/out there set of melodies so most importantly would love some opinions on them. Thanks

http://www.sitesled.com/members/semirk/ ... Cinema.mp3 (right click and save as)

mlexicon · Post by **mlexicon** » Sun Jan 01, 2006 6:49 pm

sounds definetely weird, but cool.....but i dunno about that persistant hi hat in the back....seems to have a tone that doesnt agree with the rest of the song...id like it less....and detuned or use something else to make that pattern

or maybe im completely wrong

but yeah the weirdness appreciated

Semirk · Post by **Semirk** » Mon Jan 02, 2006 11:03 am

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, had a close listen through and I see what you mean for the hihats so will change that with another hihat set.

mlexicon · Post by **mlexicon** » Mon Jan 02, 2006 1:41 pm

dont forget to post the revised track...id like to hear the differences

and the last one you did as well

Semirk · Post by **Semirk** » Mon Jan 02, 2006 4:45 pm

Sure thing mate. I'll put a post in this thread when i've got some new hihats on this track.

As for Room Change, I've been having some problems with that one, whatever I try to do the ploddyness of the kick remains and I've tried everything so not sure whats up there. I think i may recycle the elements for a future track maybe. Will have another track up in here shortly too.