dzivus - clapham mystery

arax3 · Post by **arax3** » Mon Apr 09, 2007 12:28 am

Hi guys,
i made a new track called ¨Clapham Mystery¨!
Sound is minimalistic but have some elements of electro(synt)..i created beat with four kind of bases..i would like to hear your opinion..

here is the link: http://www.bigupload.com/d=C6B54475

Tnx For Feedback And Enjoy!!

arax3 · Post by **arax3** » Tue Apr 10, 2007 11:56 pm

no replays? maybe this will help!

http://rapidshare.com/files/25337826/Dz ... y.rar.html

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=SLC9LRGQ

Biggs · Post by **Biggs** » Wed Apr 11, 2007 7:22 am

this is really boring. i apologise, but there's nothing to it. should start with a different bass drum that doesn't drag on for so long, then on the first main drop it should grab your attention. the breakdown in the middle is too obvious, maybe continue the synth longer when the beat comes in. also, the bass drum needs some kind of hi-hat or kicker over it aswell to give it a punch.

sorry if this comes across as blunt ;-)

keep workin on it...

mattdubois · Post by **mattdubois** » Wed Apr 11, 2007 11:50 am

I downloaded the files from both links and neither expanded properly...I was left with an empty folder

arax3 · Post by **arax3** » Wed Apr 11, 2007 12:56 pm

yes, tnx for comment.maye ill put some Long reverbs or decyas fading or something during the long beat parts..

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