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superfreunde · Post by **superfreunde** » Sun Dec 03, 2006 7:36 pm

hi here is my new track hope you like it please comment if you have ideas or you don`t like or whatever im happy abou every comment.
thx dominik
PS YES its my voice on the track

: http://rapidshare.com/files/5917791/i_j ... d.mp3.html

or listen at myspace
http://www.myspace.com/domnik84
bye Dominik

lostinmusiq · Post by **lostinmusiq** » Sun Dec 03, 2006 10:54 pm

hört sich lustig an dominik ... twister find ich am geilsten ... halt dich ran mein freund ...

thom · Post by **thom** » Wed Dec 06, 2006 3:10 pm

Third time I listen to it in a couple of days... I knew it would grow on me.

I like it quite a lot... only I get frustrated when the Linn-like snare picks up... I think there could be a few notes here and there that would cristallize a melody that is there already, very subtle but it's there. Then a little chord change to flip my brain around a bit...

It's got something cool for sure.

I must say I like the Linn-Drum a lot.

edit: hold on... I know!

I think this track begs for a male singer... something half-sung-half-whispered...

That would be really suave.

superfreunde · Post by **superfreunde** » Wed Dec 06, 2006 11:24 pm

thom wrote:Third time I listen to it in a couple of days... I knew it would grow on me.

I like it quite a lot... only I get frustrated when the Linn-like snare picks up... I think there could be a few notes here and there that would cristallize a melody that is there already, very subtle but it's there. Then a little chord change to flip my brain around a bit...

It's got something cool for sure.

I must say I like the Linn-Drum a lot.

edit: hold on... I know!

I think this track begs for a male singer... something half-sung-half-whispered...

That would be really suave.

hi you are right a male singer would be nice on it .
and the fact of the hidden melody is right also ,i try to find some sounds that match but dont want to make it too popy ,you know ?
can you explain me what you don`t like on the snare drum?
the structure?

thanks for your comment .

bye dominik

thom · Post by **thom** » Thu Dec 07, 2006 2:06 pm

Oh... I meant that it's when the loud snare picks up that I find that the "hidden" melody should pull itself together...

I was listening to Mikkel Metal yesterday afternoon and it reminded me of your track...

superfreunde · Post by **superfreunde** » Thu Dec 07, 2006 3:44 pm

thom wrote:Oh... I meant that it's when the loud snare picks up that I find that the "hidden" melody should pull itself together...

I was listening to Mikkel Metal yesterday afternoon and it reminded me of your track...

hey man youre so right heard it now ,i ´ll try it your way thanks for help
will make a new version with full melody
bye dominik

thom · Post by **thom** » Thu Dec 07, 2006 3:51 pm

Alright!