Bobby Raven - Jacked

Bobby Raven · Post by **Bobby Raven** » Fri May 05, 2006 3:04 pm

..first stab at this one, still needs some work and mixing..

Comments as always appreciated...

Cheers.

DL
http://213.129.73.14/members/my_tracks/ ... 478662.mp3

STRM
http://www.7161.com/streamer.cfm?filena ... k_id=10359

dirtybird · Post by **dirtybird** » Sat May 06, 2006 8:34 pm

sounds a little quiet. i like the scary deep bass sound that comes in. i think just rework the levels and it will sound a lot fuller. the snare/clap sound feels a little too processed....maybe give that a little less grit and have it a little more snappy.

i really like where it's going though. it's got a nice groove.

dirtybird · Post by **dirtybird** » Sat May 06, 2006 8:35 pm

i just thought of something else. my biggest problem when i make tracks is that they take too long to really take off. like, you have great stuff going on in the middle....i'd definitely bump it up more to the beginning and let the good stuff shine earlier in the track. just a thought.

Bobby Raven · Post by **Bobby Raven** » Mon May 08, 2006 11:37 am

..thanks for taking the time dirtybird. Much appreciated.

I know what you are saying about putting more up-front. It's a fine balance - from a track point-of-view you're right but from a DJ angle is good to have something to play with before it takes off...

Thanks again.

BR