kujoma - sparrow

kujoma · Post by **kujoma** » Mon Mar 20, 2006 7:08 pm

Track: Sparrow
Artist: Kujoma

http://trillian.homedns.org/~dpie/track ... parrow.mp3

comments are welcome

Semirk · Post by **Semirk** » Mon Mar 20, 2006 7:50 pm

I like it man. The bass is great and I like the way it's matched up against some in your face sounds. Some notes possibly a bit on the loud side though, so maybe try and have a close listen at a good loud volume to see if you think they are too striking.

The snare comes in a bit late for my liking, would have liked to hear it a bit earlier in. Overall some nice stuff indeed though.

kujoma · Post by **kujoma** » Mon Mar 20, 2006 8:05 pm

I'll make a mixdown if my monitors arive. 10 days left :-) Thanks for comment

l`bot · Post by **l`bot** » Tue Mar 21, 2006 7:07 am

mmm...

Kujoma.

Alex semko · Post by **Alex semko** » Tue Mar 21, 2006 8:05 pm

nice ideas.

I personally think the arrangement could be simplified a little bit - I can see what you are doing but overall I think it would help to let it flow a little bit.

The mix needs a bit of work as it doesn't sit well on my monitors. Definitely some great sounds / ideas.

Only my opinion,

Post again when you get your new monitors!!