Scrapheaper- Concerto For Headphones, Part 2

[scrapheaper]

I'm new here, and almost completely new to production. I've been hanging around dnbforum.com for a while, but my interests aren't limited to drum and bass, or in fact, any specific genre at all.

Here's my first attempt at a minimal house related kinda thing, I'm looking for critisism and feedback so I can improve...

http://soundcloud.com/scrapheaper/conce ... nes-part-2