Not so keen on this one sorry. The vocals are not really to my taste and at times the it sounds a bit messy with the structure. Theres some good stuff to work with in here though.
I'm sure some people may like it as it has an 'odd' factor. Not my thing really sorry.
It sounds REALLY messy to me, not my kind of minimal/music. I like the end , that double kick is maybe to close to each other, I think that will clean the mess a bit...!