New Track....

::BLM:: · Post by **::BLM::** » Mon Dec 12, 2005 3:08 am

Dont think ive ever posted a track on here before, nor an internet forum but this one is really annoying me. Been working on it for a couple of months now and have now got a complete block. See what you guys think any comments would be quality

http://s39.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3FMJ ... BV7LC8XBNI

clubfoot · Post by **clubfoot** » Mon Dec 12, 2005 1:20 pm

straight off i like the groove.

I don't think you need to add anything - but to give it something more how about maybe playing with the pitch of some of the percussive elements. A melodic twist might make the whole track a little more interesting. Another idea might be to create some kind of builds using the delay on that bongo you use - a more dynamic arrangement. I think that tracks like this benefit from subtle breakdowns or just the dropping and subsequent reintroduction of elements.

hope that helps some

tsod · Post by **tsod** » Mon Dec 12, 2005 3:48 pm

hmm i agree..
the rhytm is cool.. i like it
but the percussions sound too cheesy to me..

go ahead

ken hayakawa · Post by **ken hayakawa** » Tue Dec 13, 2005 11:59 am

nice mix

mlexicon · Post by **mlexicon** » Tue Dec 13, 2005 2:15 pm

i dig it all, just need to add some more soul into that sh!t somewhere. but i think youre on the right track

Aleksi · Post by **Aleksi** » Wed Dec 14, 2005 7:01 am

sounds cool

kenada · Post by **kenada** » Tue Dec 20, 2005 8:27 am

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Thats Gay!!!