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japatap
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japatap - Minyah

Post by japatap »

My latest MNML track, would like some feedback plz!

www.djsleebos.nl/Jap_a_Tap_-_Minyah.mp3

Made it with fruity 5 with some plugins etc.

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Post by kenada »

Nice arp, the lead ain't half bad either.
The kick has a fairly good punch to it, but could do with some more sub to it, maybe try boosting the eq around the 70-80 k range.

the lead that drops at 1:57 sounds a touch flat to me. New notes needed for this one I'd say. the majors sounds better, but the initial notes are flat as a tack.

if this were my track I'd be using some reveb and delay effex to make for some more variance. this could be done on the arp the bass/lead even the hats.

the last 2 minutes are seeming to drag on a bit, needs more changes to sustain this length of track.
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Post by japatap »

aiiit tnx for the feedback

Your right about the lead, im gonna work on that and check out the kick as well.... and the other things you said

i wasn't quit sure about somethings but dind't know how to make it sound better, your comments are very usseful, tnx !!

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