kevin h - cirqit braeker

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kevin h - cirqit braeker

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'cirqit braeker' - kevin h

http://www.7161.com/streamer.cfm?filena ... ck_id=8601

because im slightly poor, i'm using software for everything, which is hard to master with, imo.

feedback please.
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Post by Robot Criminal »

man this is pretty good
has some nice progressive feel to it
especially like the stab but dont like the melody part :s
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yeah i'm having a hard time making things sound powerful, yet not commercial.

i'm still trying to find a balance between minimal and massive.

thanks for your honesty.

kev
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arf, the melody sounds too cheap however i like the remainder.
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Post by ironlion »

I'm a fan of the noise/horn stabs, and you nicely ramp up the intensity with some hissy wobbles. The melody is tiring. As things work together well, I've not got a complaint with your mix. Nothing stands out so much as to be a sore spot. I like that the wobbling continues through the finish. Also, the production, if a little maxed, isn't overfull.

At 5:45, there's a stab atop the acid bass that suggests melodic movement or perhaps a key change. I bet fiddling around with that might help to develop melodic interest.

Darrell
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