half adder - overfocus

skept · Post by **skept** » Fri Nov 18, 2005 6:37 pm

hi. i just finished writing this track. could i please get some constructive criticism on it? i can count the tracks i have finished on one hand just for perspective. not that i am saying that so you go easy on me so let me have it.

http://thoughtcriminal.ath.cx/mp3/half_ ... rfocus.mp3

thanks!

-jason

skept · Post by **skept** » Sun Nov 20, 2005 6:07 pm

feedback? please. i won't be offended if you say it sucks as long as it is accompanied with why it sucks.

'k'' · Post by **'k''** » Sun Nov 20, 2005 8:36 pm

i think you won't get any feedback on this board, sry.
it's because.. ..hm i don't know.

mlexicon · Post by **mlexicon** » Sun Nov 20, 2005 9:19 pm

i like that lil breadown near th beginning....wasnt expecting it

seems to lack some low end ...yup

and thats all from me

skept · Post by **skept** » Mon Nov 21, 2005 12:22 am

mlexicon wrote:i like that lil breadown near th beginning....wasnt expecting it

yeah i should have chopped it up with more things like that.

mlexicon wrote:seems to lack some low end ...yup

and thats all from me

i kind of thought so too. the bassline sounds too percussive or something like that.

thanks!