hi. i just finished writing this track. could i please get some constructive criticism on it? i can count the tracks i have finished on one hand just for perspective. not that i am saying that so you go easy on me so let me have it.
http://thoughtcriminal.ath.cx/mp3/half_ ... rfocus.mp3
thanks!
-jason
half adder - overfocus
yeah i should have chopped it up with more things like that.mlexicon wrote:i like that lil breadown near th beginning....wasnt expecting it
i kind of thought so too. the bassline sounds too percussive or something like that.mlexicon wrote:seems to lack some low end ...yup
and thats all from me
thanks!