thomas jaldemark - vid min grav / mein farbe bist schwarz

[thomasjaldemark]

okay. had a session with ableton for a few hours yesterday. found the shufflecommand and some neat lfothingie for the bass and voila, a finished output!

here is first:
http://www.kopat.org/industri/klipp/tho ... n_grav.mp3

some kind of weirddruggieshufflekompaktpop with lyrics in swedish. its more funny if ya understand swedish i guess an old 70 year old man i found on the internet hehe.

and.. second: on the darker tip with some german spoken word in it. ich kannte das glück!

http://www.kopat.org/industri/klipp/tho ... chwarz.mp3

anyway, gimme feedback. sucks/rock/average?

[thomasjaldemark]

anyone?

[-ix]

The first second one is to dark for me but I like the first one!
What is the old dude saying?

[thomasjaldemark]

in swedish:

"Gråt ej, kära, vid min grav.
Jag finns ej där. Jag har gett mig av.

Med tusen vindar blåser jag.
Är daggens glimt en solig dag.

Är solsken över mognad säd.
Är färgers spel i höstens träd.

Så gråt ej, vännen,
gråt ej, kära, vid min grav."

in a really bad translation something like this:

dont cry, my love , at my grave
im not there, i've left this place

with thousands of winds i am flying
blablablaba

am the sunshine over the fields
am the colours game of autumn trees

so , dont cry, my friend
dont cry, my love, at my grave.

[akomb]

[clubfoot]

liked them both equally

first one was good but there was some annoying high freq that needed removing - I might have been tempted to build the rhythm on that one too.

[daedum]

i love it! (that image)

[thomasjaldemark]

tnx guys.. will chech that out