mlexicon - closer / so fun

mlexicon · Post by **mlexicon** » Mon May 30, 2005 7:45 am

ok so these 2 tracks id of course love some feedback on cuz who doesnt want feedback

im happy with it but im always fighting myself to put more...but maybe im too easily satisfied....well here you go

http://www.blackboxmusic.net/closer.mp3

http://www.blackboxmusic.net/sofun.mp3

Essaj · Post by **Essaj** » Mon May 30, 2005 2:40 pm

havent heard all the tracks you posted over here but i remember being pretty hyped about one of the first ones you posted so i think you can do much better than this , sorry.....

love the little synth line in the first track though , try to make the track a little more interresting and it would be a great track...try some variation in the hihats section or something like that....this one has potential

didnt feel the 2nd track at all sorry

mlexicon · Post by **mlexicon** » Tue May 31, 2005 2:57 am

haha sh!t....thanx man
ok as you informed me and my friend just informed me..
ill use his words..."that 2nd one is totally ghey"

it was the coffee bean talkin
thanx for the first one...i tihnk i forgot something in it...need to check my file to see wot happened

BobStock · Post by **BobStock** » Tue May 31, 2005 10:11 am

I Like that first one!!! Have you take the second link down? I think so!

Keep on working !! You make goo d sh!t!

mlexicon · Post by **mlexicon** » Tue May 31, 2005 11:23 am

thanx

Johnatan Traffic · Post by **Johnatan Traffic** » Fri Jun 03, 2005 5:53 pm

first track:

arangement is good and sounds fit together, do I agree with essaj about that a few things are missing, throw a few hihatsline of fx's groove sounds after the last minibreak and your tracks is finished I would say, but heah, thats my opinion

but keep up that sound, I think its pretty original!

greets Koos