Now I'm studying music theory and ear training .. Do I help it? I also think that with fl studio can achieve high quality results

I'm creating in Fl studio and i have many problems with tracks. I want to creating Minimal tech house but I have very little experience in the work and it turns out not all. Here is an example that I have obtained http://spaces.ru/files/?name=apomuc;sid=;dir=1278233;p=1;plain=0&read=13596961 Her...